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Commission: Vicky and Tootie Age Swap by EduartBoudewijn Commission: Vicky and Tootie Age Swap by EduartBoudewijn
Here's the updated version of this image that I originally drew as a request during my last request stream for Dracoknight545. Dracoknight545 commissioned me to properly lineart and color the image and here's the final result. I'm quite happy how it turned out; although she can be really mean Vicky looks quite cute at this age. Just hope that Tootie won't be too hard on her with her payback. 
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Critique by CyberFurry10 CyberFurry10/critique/1502292111">Apr 7, 2017, 7:01:31 PM
Hello there!

Good points:

- I like the theme with this. It seems that Tootie has got a stroke of luck and became the "older" sister and now it's time for payback for what Vicky did to her.... (It's sort of funny, actually! XD)

- Ack! I like how adorable and cute Vicky's toddler expression is! She pleading her sister not to get payback. XD

Improvements/Suggestions/Questions:

- Tootie's finger (the one that is pointing) is cartoonish big and fat which doesn't fit with the semi-realistic style of this artwork.

- Tootie's torso seems skinny compared to her hips which make it looks unproportionate.

Hope this helps! ^_^
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DoubleDandE Featured By Owner 4 days ago   General Artist
Hello, I'm from ProjectComment

Looks like the tables have turned in this image right here. I like how you have the words in the bubbles easy to read, and they are evenly spaced from each other. The edge between the words and the bubbles appears to be consistent, and it shows that you took great care into ensuring it doesn’t look crowded. We can also follow the conversation starting from top and making are way to the bottom. We know who’s speaking, and we can see the emotions not only in the words, but in the faces. Looks like Tootie is enjoying it now.

Their age difference is seen very well from here. Vicky looks like a little girl, and her clothes are baggy here. Her sister looks fully grown. Her goggles also show her age, as well as her outfit since growing up, the details are there.


The background is very nice, and it goes well with helping the characters pop out, but also setting them into an environment. I still feel the characters here are colored and shaded quite nice, but the colors (at least the darker colors that is), could use some more highlights so we can see the details in them. They’re darkened a bit too much. Using colors other than black (or on the grey scale for that matter), to make up the dark color would be helpful. It’ll let us see all the necessary details, and would also brighten up the picture a bit. From the heavy shadows and darkened color, make the characters appear as if a heavy spot light is over them.


Over all though you’ve done an excellent job on this picture here. I rather like the use of having colored outlines for the background to pop out the characters, and the bright color in itself seems quite fitting with the attitude that’s going on here. The shading on the characters look nice, and could be shaded with a color that’s a bit brighter, at least so the two sisters are a bit more vibrant.


Great job, and keep up the good work. :thumbsup: 

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EduartBoudewijn Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you for the critique! I definitely feel like I've been struggling a bit with highlights lately, I often feel like I'm overdoing them; which then results in images that are a bit darker than I originally intended. I'm glad you like this image though and thanks again for helping me out with these comments ^^
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DoubleDandE Featured By Owner 3 days ago   General Artist
You're Welcome. 
Glad to be of help. 
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KCHuang Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2017  Student
OMG just dropping by to say, the shading on the walls/floor on this one feels SO much better! The improvement is incredible! - project commenter from last time :D

LMK if you'd like more comments from me or not! I don't want to be overbearing and make it feel like I'm picking on you specifically but I'm also really excited how much you improved :D
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EduartBoudewijn Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Hey thank you! Glad you like how this one looks. I drew this one before the one you originally commented on though =p Still I'd really appreciate any future comments you'd like to give on my stuff. I can use all the feedback I can get, and I never take it personally. 
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DSegno92 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2017  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This reminds me of an episode when Vicky becomes younger than Timmy
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EduartBoudewijn Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah, I was reminded of that episode as well while drawing this. 
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ItsAllPossible Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017
Paybacks ABitch, Vicky! ;-) 
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Ironwarchiefwarsong Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2017
serves her right
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derkman Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017
Nice one
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EduartBoudewijn Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you ^^
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PLCTheCd Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Gotta love the payback
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EduartBoudewijn Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
That's always fun to see, right? =p
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DARKZADAR-ZERO Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
neat !
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EduartBoudewijn Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks ^^
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DARKZADAR-ZERO Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcomes ^^
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salo14 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
great swap, I especially like how vicky turned out ^^
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EduartBoudewijn Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
I liked that a lot as well; she just looks so cute ^^ I'm glad you like it ;) 
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lordbwargle Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017
Another great swap!
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EduartBoudewijn Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you! ^^
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Kazumy Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017
Wonderful swap, very detailed and love theirindividual expressions. 
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EduartBoudewijn Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you :) 
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griever789 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017
For some reason let settle this with a game reminds me of pre card game yugioh which makes me think that tootie going to transform into a darker edgier form and play a shadow game
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EduartBoudewijn Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
The shadow games were so inconsistent that this could basicly be the result of one; where Tootie steals Vicky's age over the course of the game. 
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klatuk4u Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017
Another excellent swap!  You are the swap master sir!
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EduartBoudewijn Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks man :) I'm just trying my best =p
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klatuk4u Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2017
And succeeding!
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Dracoknight545 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Awesome job, Ed. I love it but there is a typo you forgot to put a space between "settle" and "with".

Other than that it looks awesome
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EduartBoudewijn Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Oops, well spotted. I updated the image now. 

Glad you like how it looks, thanks a bunch again for commissioning the upgrade :)
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Dracoknight545 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Okay

You're Welcome, I look forward to doing another commission with you in the future
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