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Weekly: A trunk of Earl Grey

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Here's this week's weekly drawing; like I said earlier I was looking to do some redraws. I settled on redrawing this image since it's an image that was originally drawn in 2009, I used to like it a lot, but over time I started to notice the flaws more and more. I did a poll in 2014 of which images would be fun to redraw and this image got voted second, after Wanda's Mayhem, which I've already redrawn:  Wanda's Mayhem Redone by EduartBoudewijn

So going forward with the redraws, I really wanted to try and update the image properly, while staying fairly faithful to it. Obviously I made a few changes, but I think I did a proper job in keeping it close to the original in spirit. I moved one of her hands from her ears to her trunk, to make the pose a bit less 'twinned' and I made the pose in general a bit more naturalistic. I'm very happy how it turned out, especially since in the past whenever I've drawn elephants I've never been all that satisfied with it, which is also why there are so few elephant TF's in my gallery. Most of my discarded sketches used to be elephants from what I can remember. 

Going for a bit of a nostalgic input; I remember that when I originally was drawing  the image, in 2009, I didn't have my own computer or laptop yet, so at the time I didn't have much for references. The reason I drew so many Disney characters was that we used to have a lot of Disney comics at my parents' house, so I could use those for reference together with an old animal encyclopedia. Nowadays drawing sure is a lot easier with the whole of the internet at my fingertips =p

I'd love to hear your thoughts on this image compared to the original! And I hope you all enjoy it! I'll probably get a new poll up soon for future redraws!

Original:  Jane Elephant by EduartBoudewijn

Speeddrawing video: www.youtube.com/watch?v=R7LMzk…
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Hello there! _(OuO)/

Good points:

- I can the immense improvement from that 2009 drawing. The arms are more proportionate to the torso and the elephant head looks more realistic.

- I like how the character has outlines while the background is painted. (I don't know it seems appealing to me.)

Improvements/Suggestions/Questions:

- The knee seems to be placed too low. Also, it kind of look similar to a pimple which looks weird and the line next to it seem to go too deep into the leg. :/

- The elephant feet look less like an elephant. It's almost resembled a raptor's feet which is not like an elephant!

Hope this helps! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=":D (Big Grin)"/>